This last month has absolutely flown past. Can't believe how fast February went, and now we're half way through March.
Zane has been retiled Forged in Fire and went out on submission this weekend. (agents) My query letter appears to be strong. Just sent the first batch of eight queries out last night and two requests for partials came through today. This will be the only time I mention my query status. From now on mum’s the word.
I’ve decided to title the series Forged in --as in Zane’s book will be Forged in Fire, Cosky’s Forged in Ice, Rawls Forged in Fury and Mac’s Forged in Betrayal.
And now for my contribution to Six Sentence Sunday!
These lines are from the first kiss. Beth is having second thoughts.
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Clamping her mouth shut, she set every muscle to resisting.
A low growl rumbled up his throat and throbbed against her lips like a threat, but he broke contact and eased back.
Beth relaxed. Clearly he’d gotten the message. Except he leaned down and nipped her bottom lip. Not enough to sting, just enough to send a message—along with a rush of blood to her head—just enough to let her know that. . .yeah. . he had no intention of playing by her rules.
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Wow, I can't wait to read more of Zane and Beth.
ReplyDeleteVery nice! Can't wait to see him NOT play by her rules.
ReplyDeleteZowie. That's hot. The tension is great!
ReplyDeleteI love those, you know you want to, kisses. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat excerpt! Love it!
ReplyDeleteFabulous news about your queries and the requests already. :)
Good snippet - - what rules ?
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the partial requests, Trish!! So excited for you. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat six too! Rules are meant to be broken. ;-)
Ha! Cute. I like him already!
ReplyDeleteSexy six. Good luck with your partials. . .
ReplyDeleteWho needs rules? It's all faitr in love and war
ReplyDeleteHey, there are rules?!
ReplyDeleteNice, nice... Paranormal romance?
ReplyDeleteAlways love a rule breaker!
ReplyDeletePlease don't play by her rules. Keep her guessing. It is hotter that way.
ReplyDeleteHis rules sound more fun! LOL
ReplyDeleteGreat six!
ReplyDeleteYou go girl, don't give him want he wants. Great six.
ReplyDeleteI like this pair. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteLove the interplay!
ReplyDeleteGreat last line. Great titles for the series. Good luck with querying!
ReplyDeleteGreat six! And best of luck on the submissions!
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