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My addition to SSS this week is from taken from a snippet where the white knights are racing to the hostages rescue. Although you may not be able to tell they are the good guys from this excerpt. lol
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Mac turned his attention to their chauffeur’s tense face. “My boy back there has a Smith and Wesson .500. You ever looked down the barrel of one of those babies? It’s like staring into cannon, leaves a crater the size of a pizza box. He’s got that sucker pressed against the back of your seat and while traveling through all that foam and fabric might slow it down some, that bullet’s still gonna disintegrate a good chunk of your spine and turn your guts into soup.” He twisted the gun against Little Mike’s ribs. “You copy me?”
Love Mac's voice. Great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat six! Thanks for sharing it.
ReplyDelete~Sarah
www.sarahgrimm.com
I certainly copy!
ReplyDeleteGreat six!
ReplyDeleteHa! Love it. :)
ReplyDeleteWow, gritty and gripping. Great job!
ReplyDeleteOoo gritty, grabbing! love it!
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Angela
http://angelasstone.livejournal.com
Ouch! I felt that! Great job!
ReplyDeleteGraphic and wonderful. Great voice, great tone, great dialogue. Love Mac!
ReplyDeleteI like bad good guys, and if I was the driver, I'd be really really scared right now. As it is I'm just turned on because they sound cute.
ReplyDeleteLove the six, see you next week.
Great six!
ReplyDeleteI copy him!!
ReplyDeleteThat is some awesome dialogue! I know I copy him.
ReplyDeleteSounds like a manly man scene. I'd let him rescue me any day!
ReplyDeletejoderjo402 AT gmail DOT com
Nothing like a little intimidating of the bad guys to make the good guys look larger than life!
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet! Whew, I copy!
ReplyDeleteSheesh! *hands raised* I copy! I copy!
ReplyDeleteI can't tell you how thoroughly I enjoyed that! Great six!
ReplyDeleteI'd listen to him...no doubts.
ReplyDeleteI loved it, and you had me grinning!
ReplyDeleteOoh...I can so picture Al Pacino saying this! Great voice! What a deliciously different 6 from the others I've read!
ReplyDeletesize of a pizza box ? Wonderful !
ReplyDeleteOh, I *so* dig tough guys. Especially the ones with guns.
ReplyDeleteGreat voice--very gritty. Fabulous six!
ReplyDeleteBetter listen to Mac, that sounds like a painful, game ending gunshot wound if things end up going poorly.
ReplyDeleteFabulous tension! Well done. :)
ReplyDeleteDefinitely want that guy on our side! Great six!
ReplyDeletegritty, raw. I love it
ReplyDeleteVivid scene. Very tense.
ReplyDeleteoh the tension! love it
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't argue with him!
ReplyDeletesounds like incentive to drive!
ReplyDeleteWow! This guy is tough. Lots of tension. Great snippet!
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