tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post4260071009187925137..comments2023-06-09T01:28:22.470-07:00Comments on Trish McCallan: Six Sentence Sunday #sixsunday #amwritingTrishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03232378093017812896noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-60043219249779009812011-02-23T14:34:14.073-08:002011-02-23T14:34:14.073-08:00Damn that is cold.Damn that is cold.Alyssa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08388521969658890281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-45687070057195334852011-02-21T13:58:27.749-08:002011-02-21T13:58:27.749-08:00Poor kids. You nailed the creepy vibe for sure.Poor kids. You nailed the creepy vibe for sure.Hailey Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14198366574573877171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-19263383179336419912011-02-21T09:57:40.274-08:002011-02-21T09:57:40.274-08:00Well how thoughtful of him! :-OWell how thoughtful of him! :-OPip Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02141472079095619099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-24827726321089627092011-02-21T07:53:57.872-08:002011-02-21T07:53:57.872-08:00I don't think I could even write about killing...I don't think I could even write about killing kids. Great six. I'm totally creeped.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-89273816760097618552011-02-21T06:05:46.305-08:002011-02-21T06:05:46.305-08:00how thoughtful of him..Chucky Cheese, first. LOL T...how thoughtful of him..Chucky Cheese, first. LOL This guy is evil...great snippet! Really shows how cold hearted he is, but how he doesn't see it that way. LOVE itJoAnne Kenrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15234275353277804224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-33530140914565984542011-02-20T19:45:05.193-08:002011-02-20T19:45:05.193-08:00Lots of excellent suspense in six sentences. That ...Lots of excellent suspense in six sentences. That creep has got to die, but how, and how to rescue the kids?Lynne Murrayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12549765142750458479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-71433249886025891412011-02-20T19:42:56.261-08:002011-02-20T19:42:56.261-08:00That is so cold!That is so cold!Lex Valentinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04913165199017718669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-84793658055176688452011-02-20T17:37:28.853-08:002011-02-20T17:37:28.853-08:00Love it! I like the internal conflict and then th...Love it! I like the internal conflict and then the sort of compromise with taking them to Chucky Cheese. Fab job!Miranda Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09026436848807292844noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-57633947967463710512011-02-20T15:55:06.665-08:002011-02-20T15:55:06.665-08:00Now there's a heartless villain. I'm read...Now there's a heartless villain. I'm ready to choke him on Chucky CheeseBianca Swanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11718152975810552342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-38500529992802860322011-02-20T15:10:27.173-08:002011-02-20T15:10:27.173-08:00Well, despite his nagging conscience, you've c...Well, despite his nagging conscience, you've created a character I can really hate. great six!Lauri J Owenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11915434024514573480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-8198983004218826822011-02-20T14:40:36.929-08:002011-02-20T14:40:36.929-08:00Spectacularly villainous. Chucky Cheese! OMG.Spectacularly villainous. Chucky Cheese! OMG.Taryn Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11130206764352777367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-91484937689141940222011-02-20T14:04:25.995-08:002011-02-20T14:04:25.995-08:00ZOMG! That's so awesome! A bad guy who's a...ZOMG! That's so awesome! A bad guy who's actually bad!!D Carneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06453390999707087274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-78380830063144924972011-02-20T14:04:01.585-08:002011-02-20T14:04:01.585-08:00OK. I am totally freaked outOK. I am totally freaked outJayel Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16895398236919824214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-50315242430175722702011-02-20T13:06:11.040-08:002011-02-20T13:06:11.040-08:00I hate it when villains have a decent streak in hi...I hate it when villains have a decent streak in him. I get that he thinks he has to do what he has to do, but still. <br /><br />He's a bad bad bad man!Casihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16544542457930388133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-9506253003508062112011-02-20T11:54:10.317-08:002011-02-20T11:54:10.317-08:00Ha! This is a good villain. I like the way his act...Ha! This is a good villain. I like the way his actions make perfect sense to him, even though they're obviously evil.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-87679816982001108802011-02-20T10:47:23.004-08:002011-02-20T10:47:23.004-08:00That is so incredibly creepy. I feel dirty being i...That is so incredibly creepy. I feel dirty being inside his head.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-70383951301652473162011-02-20T10:45:42.937-08:002011-02-20T10:45:42.937-08:00Chilling, but you know you have a believable villa...Chilling, but you know you have a believable villain when he can justify his actions in his own head. He's calculating and diabolic, but thinks he's doing the best thing possible. Disturbing six (in a GOOD way).L. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-46320953090278234342011-02-20T09:06:39.418-08:002011-02-20T09:06:39.418-08:00OMG! That excerpt certainly got my attention. Nice...OMG! That excerpt certainly got my attention. Nicely done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-65581987377462642712011-02-20T08:00:27.412-08:002011-02-20T08:00:27.412-08:00Ooh! Well done! I say he should take out the mouse...Ooh! Well done! I say he should take out the mouse while he's there. That's one annoying cheese breath the world won't miss.<br /><br />Laurel <br /><br />www.ravenlaw.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-43333116348267287282011-02-20T07:54:57.054-08:002011-02-20T07:54:57.054-08:00Wow, great way to make a villain really evil. Good...Wow, great way to make a villain really evil. Good job!Sandra Sookoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08864799097052526762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-70611505224108649842011-02-20T07:52:06.543-08:002011-02-20T07:52:06.543-08:00*gasp* Trish! So much is said here and the emotion...*gasp* Trish! So much is said here and the emotion it evokes in the reader. Well done!Layna Pimentelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04181370153112829605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-10125333846202005822011-02-20T06:46:29.921-08:002011-02-20T06:46:29.921-08:00Totally creep, so, just right!Totally creep, so, just right!Laura Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06405372483109781087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-34409965387472685392011-02-20T06:14:32.276-08:002011-02-20T06:14:32.276-08:00He gives me the shivers.He gives me the shivers.Edie Ramerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17084144940233965447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-12341373785257778062011-02-20T05:01:29.456-08:002011-02-20T05:01:29.456-08:00Yikes! This villain is horrible! Poor kids. :(Yikes! This villain is horrible! Poor kids. :(Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3949191053929905003.post-31070414417558297372011-02-20T04:40:07.231-08:002011-02-20T04:40:07.231-08:00Wow, this guy is EVIL!Wow, this guy is EVIL!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com